Here are three of my favourites. I was going to mention good trailers for crap films, but the three that leapt to mind also happen to be for three of my all-time favourite films. But I loved these trailers before I knew that.

Eternal Sunshine - I love the naff fake advert then sudden change of gear into the delirious mind-zapping. While further trailers for the film made an effort to spell out what was happening, I think this is the winner,  showing the heart and peril of the story then leaving me humming ‘Mr Blue Sky‘ for weeks.

The Man Who Wasn’t There - Fan of the film or not, I think this is genuinely one of the best trailers ever made. Billy Bob Thornton’s unsettling acceptance vs Tony Shalhoub’s posturing bullshit narrates dreamlike shots of the everyday, making everything seem significant. Awesome.   

Wall-E - I think there are about 19 different teasers and trailers for Wall-E. But this is the only one that makes me cry with laughter and ‘aww’ every single time. You’re entirely drawn into Wall-E’s world…only for it to end with Wall-E leaving it. A perfect ‘what happens next?’ trailer.

My choices are from the last decade simply because my memory’s crap and because I know I’ve watched these three over and over online (which I couldn’t really do before the year 2000). This was meant to be a post about the pros/cons of ‘trailer moments’ in your script but…well, once you star looking at trailers on youtube

This is pure speculation, but I think the online gaming world would be a different shape had the sequels to The Matrix (somehow) lived up to all their hype and The Matrix Online would have been the perfect opportunity to bring new audiences into Neo’s medium. Regardless, The Matrix Online still went ahead, expanding the story-world for the die-hards and the sci-curious, But it could have been bigger.

But are potential audiences just waiting for their favourite franchise to expand into the internet? As the launch of the DC Universe Online draws close, I’m finding myself deeply considering coughing up and crossing the line into online gaming. What’s tempted me? Not just that you can create your own character to then be mentored by the DC Hero or Villain of your choice, but the stories have also been written by some of DC’s top writers and features voice talent from the DCU cartoons (Mark Hamill as the Joker included).

Sounds a lot like Batman: Arkham Asylum really. So if you played and enjoyed Arkham Asylum, why won’t you be signing up for DC Universe Online? Seriously.

‘cos as cool as that video looks (from my POV, anyway), these MMORPGs seem different, don’t they.

In learning about writing for games, I was taught that describing your game as a list of adjectives is a good way to describe the experience (ie - run, shoot, duck, fly, hide, find etc) Is what’s keeping you offline that they aren’t developing the MMORPG with the right adjectives to suit you? If so, what’s missing? Is it a genre thing? Is the fact that the main examples I’ve mentioned feature flying around and probably thumping people what kept you positively unintrigued? (but there are others)

MMORPGs seem to have it all - serial storytelling, stand-alone missions, social networking and an independent gaming experience. So why are they still a niche thing? What’s keeping you offline?

While watching Stephen Moffat’s first Doctor Who finale the second time round, I noticed one of many differences between him and Russell T Davies’ writing. This was the first series finale for ages which didn’t feature real-life BBC journalists describing the way that the world was now being devastated by Daleks or Cybermen etc. Even without this device, there was no sense that the world wasn’t in peril so I was left wondering…not only, ‘is it okay’ to use the news in storytelling, but do we ever actually need to?

It clearly breaks the ‘show – don’t tell’ rule so could just be labelled as lazy writing. But in his book ‘Save the Cat!’, Blake Snyder described how Stephen Spielberg considers it just plain bad writing: As he explains, in ET – The Extra-terrestrial, if he’d shown the news breaking worldwide of proof of alien existence, this becomes the planet’s population dealing with this news – a very different story to an isolated boy helping his alien friend get home. There are plenty of journalists in ET – but we don’t follow them, the focus stays on Elliott. 

But then I can’t help of thinking of examples I really like of the press covering all angles of particular events. Shaun of the Dead (a script I am increasing impressed with the more and more I look at it!) not only has the Doctor Who-style cameos of real news presenters (and Vernon Kay) but also plays it for laughs by channel-hopping through them to conjoin sentences in funny ways. Crucially, it also clearly shows that the main characters are the ones watching the news – not just us. Too often I think this device is used to dump exposition on the audience – but is it okay to use the news if we are learning stuff alongside the characters?

I can’t not mention a glaring example from my favourite film either. The above cameo-heavy montage shows the rise and rise of the Ghostbusters as heralded by the media. But is the difference that the news actually features our main characters, showing them ‘growing up’? I think it’s interesting to note that this sequence is the only moment of media coverage in the film. When the Ghostbusters take on Dana Barrett’s building at the film’s big battle, the events are not relayed to us by journalists (unlike the dismal ‘narrated’ climax to Spider-man 3) the audience is instead put there right in the crowd, cheering on our heroes!

We see it often enough, but how often is news-narration the most-effective method of storytelling? Is it okay when the characters are learning stuff alongside the audience? Is it okay when our protagonists are themselves the news? Is it lazy writing? Or just a quick and efficient way to get through vital exposition? When is it okay to ‘use the news’?

Nope. Not from Barton Fink, not from The Singing Detective and not even from Adaptation (although I must admit I find Brian Cox’s brief and brilliant turn as Robert McKee far more useful and inspiring than any of his books).

My favourite scene about writing comes from wuxia movie Hero starring Jet Li, Zhang Ziyi and Tony Leung. The scene where a caligraphy school is attacked by the Army of Qin and Nameless (Li) and Falling Snow (Maggie Cheung) defend the students and Broken Sword (Leung) while they continue writing.

To get all artily metaphorical for a moment, think of all of the arrows as distractions while you’re trying to write. You need to consciously send out your inner Jet Li out to protect you from them. Even the bit where Broken Sword’s drawing cane is splintered by an arrow… so he grabs an arrow out of the air and draws with that - that’s just using influences from the outside world to fuel your writing

But mostly, this is just a self-indulgent blog post to say I love this scene and this film in general.

I’m knuckling down with my entry for the Red Planet Prize over the next few weeks so I might be a bit quiet. The story I’m submitting is one that I’ve had in various incarnations over the last few years that everyone has liked the idea of but I haven’t had the script to do that idea justice.

I don’t have the best of luck when it comes to script contests. But even if I don’t get anywhere with this one, it’s not going to be for lack of trying.

Onwards

In my own writing, whether it stars a procedural copper or an accidental investigator, mysteries have always been my ‘thing’. Trouble is, if your protagonist is just doing their job week after week, it can be hard to generate an emotional connection - no matter how many endearing tics they have.

This is easily remedied in a film/one-off. A case starts as professional but quickly becomes personal (Silence of the Lambs, Chinatown, Se7en). But if you’re creating an ongoing TV, web or comic series - surely everything can’t be ‘hey, this case resonates with that traumatic broccoli experience I had as a child!’ But you’ll probably need something if you don’t want your show to simply be a cerebral exercise.

I’ve heard the appeal of the Mystery described as ‘the audience’s desire to see Order triumph over the Chaos of the outside world‘ (like the drunken football fans who chucked our bins all over the street last night. Where were you, Batman?) But where Bob Peck in a one-off story like Edge of Darkness needed to know why his daughter died, the returning series detective needs a more abstract motivation for taking on the Chaos of the world that we can understand and emotionally connect with.

The reason we connect with any of the above more than, for example, Miss Marple is because of this vocational calling that made them a detective. Details aside, this can usually be summed up as one word. Redemption. Ambition. Validation. Even Retaliation. (they don’t all have to end in ‘-tion’ btw )

So it’s okay to pile on as many quirks as you like to make your detective unique. But before you do, make sure you can easily answer the core reason why this guy or gal is a detective in the first place.

In scriptreading, often a character acts out of character so they can steer the plot towards the desired set-piece. This never reads well. Similarly, you can tell when a writer is writing a character who is not like the writer…yet still makes the sort of decisions that the writer would. This doesn’t ring true either.

The Meyers-Briggs test is a personality profiler that categorises you into one of sixteen personality types using 70 ‘yes or no’ questions. It’s quick to do and I’ve become quite obsessed with it of late, profiling everyone I know and finding the results spookily accurate. But whether you believe the entire human population can be categorised so easily or not, chances are your fictional characters can be.

Following my post about films set in a single location, I’ve been working on my own confined script where the protagonist’s decisions/actions will really swing the (hopefully) pressure-cooker environment one way or t’other. My heroine turned out to be an ENFJ categorised as the ‘Idealist Mentor’:

ENFJ = Extrovert + iNtuitive + Feeling + Judging

or ENFJ = or

But the fact that she’s a ‘Mentor’ type doesn’t mean she has to take the Mentor role. Elizabeth Bennet from Pride and Prejudice and Sam Becket from Quantum Leap are also considered ENFJs, both sharing the same altruistic, externally focussed and positive outlooks and are both clear protagonists. Yet this personality type also has good powers of persuasion and manipulation - so there’s no reason why a ENFJ can’t be the antagonist either.

So TAKE THE TEST - either for your character or even yourself . The results provide a really good abstract character bio that you can then check corresponds with the decisions you’ve made for your protagonist.

I’d love to know if you find they match up (for your character or for you!)

In my opinion, many single-location stories have an ‘ooooh’ concept but only a ‘meh’ execution. There’s an interesting hook at the beginning, a decent pay-off at the end and a lot of treading-water in the middle. I find this isn’t because the characters don’t go anywhere new - it’s because the STORY doesn’t. I don’t think these films are ‘too talky’ by definition - but it’s all too easy to write redundant dialogue that’s simply filling pages until the next set-piece. (Similarly, filling Act Two with chases and jet-setting doesn’t help matters either. If it doesn’t move the story along, it’s still going to be hollow.)

This is why I always use David Slade’s HARD CANDY as my favourite example of a low-budget, high-impact breakthrough movie. Two principal actors, one main location (a nice house), a central as well as a notorious scene you’ve probably heard about even if you’ve not see it (Download the script here)

In Hard Candy, what keeps the pace alive and the drama vivid is that the SITUATION keeps changing, even if the location doesn’t. Far more expensive films could take a lesson. Each sequence provides a revelation or shifts the balance of power between the two protagonists. This is what grabbed me. It’s by no means perfect but, by the end of the film, I didn’t know whose side I was on - let alone how I wanted it to end or how it actually would.

From Hard Candy to The Shining and The Breakfast Club, there’s no way these films are a gimmick. They just seem that way when the writer has come up with a cool location instead of a cool story.

With last night’s Casualty cancelled in favour of Eurovision, I got my hour of hospital drama via PULSE, streaming now on iPlayer before it airs on BBC Three on Thursday 3rd June at 9pm.

Launching straight in with a gruesome and somewhat suspect surgery, PULSE establishes that it’s not vampires or other beasties we’re scared of here - it’s people. But be warned, PULSE doesn’t shy away from its full body horror either. We’re quickly introduced to the core cast of trainee doctors as Hannah (Claire Foy - Little Dorrit, Going Postal) returns to the training hospital described as the suicide capital of the NHS. Having suffered a breakdown following the death of her doctor mother, Hannah’s claims to have discovered unorthodox treatments for one of her patients has everyone watching to see if she’s snapped again.

This first hour of PULSE raced by, laying down swift characterisation whilst setting up ominous plot threads for the future. This is a pilot that deserves to take off. Despite moments of wry and gallows humour, Paul Cornell’s script nicely avoids the tongue-in-cheek hokiness of recent British genre fayre, making the drama and the tension all the more gripping.

As Hannah, Claire Foy draws us into not only her personal trauma but also the pressurised world of being a trainee Doctor, seemingly horrific even without your bosses playing Frankenstein. But the supporting cast all get time to shine too, either shattering our pre-conceptions of who they really are or giving us a glimpse of what their journey might be in a full series. Of particular interest was Ben Miles (Coupling) who seems to have started channelling Jonathan Pryce as the hospital’s enigmatic counsellor.

Without wanting to give anything away, PULSE builds up to a game-changing epilogue and proves that horror can work on television. It also looks great so I was pleasantly surprised to learn from the end credits that it was shot by the brilliant Fabian Wagner (who was DOP on my first short film). My only possible qualms were a few disorientating edits and that perhaps we could have learned a little more about what Hannah’s normally like when she isn’t questioning her own sanity. But, as a pilot, this worked entirely. I was hooked and want to see more.

So support PULSE by watching it on iPlayer and leaving your comments, joining the facebook group or watching its TV airing next Thursday. Either way, don’t miss out on exactly the kind of intriguing, challenging and captivating drama BBC Three should be offering more often.

Watch the entire Pilot Online here now.

With BBC 3 offering a fresh round of drama pilots, it was probably a given I’d instantly be drawn to the horror one. But medical horror PULSE has a lot more going for it than my simple need to be a bit creeped out. Primarily, it’s written by the indomitable Paul Cornell, whose Doctor Who two-parter ‘Human Nature/The Family of Blood‘ raised the bar terrifically for what New-Who could do and who put a mammoth on the M25 in the first ten minutes of his Primeval episode - by far my favourite of the whole show. Says Cornell of PULSE:

We are the nation, after all, that’s really proud of its NHS, but at the same time looks at those stern official buildings and shivers a little.  

PULSE is also produced by World Productions who, as well as This Life and No Angels, were behind grown-up vampire miniseries Ultraviolet - a show that now seems waaaaay ahead of its time considering the current vampiric glut and which resisted the temptation to slide down the tongue-in-cheek genre route.

But to convince the BBC Three to take PULSE to a full series, it needs to get watched - and this is where we can actually decide what’s on telly for once. Being Human survived the last round of commissioning due to internet buzz - but as well as joining PULSE’s facebook group, you can now watch the entire pilot online before its TV broadcast next week (Thursday 3rd June, 9pm BBC Three). As Paul Cornell tweeted himself, watching it and leaving a nice comment could make all the difference to whether it’s commissioned.

So vote with your feet. Get PULSE in your eyes!

(I’ll be doing that today - review coming tomorrow)

You only need to look at any ‘Best Actress’ category to see the rarity of decent female leading roles in films these days - but what had never occurred to me was a lack of female roles AT ALL. Scriptwriter/scriptreader extraordinaire Lucy Hay recently pointed me towards these statistics which show (amongst other big issues) from 1990-2006, 73% of ALL characters were male.

You can actually see this in a lot of big film’s core casts. You get your identifiable hero, the more interesting mentor/best friend, an idiosynchratic baddie…and look, there’s a woman in it too! Posters for big movies even seem happy to sell it this way:

And, with Hollywood looking back in time for remake inspiration, it’s also increasingly going backwards when it comes to equality of roles. Having Uhura on the bridge in the 60s was a big deal - now it just looks behind the times instead of ahead of them if she’s the only woman there (and you know I hate being mean about Star Trek!) So it’s up to those writing original story worlds to keep moving things forwards.

But this isn’t just about the core cast. Writing decent female lead roles aside (that’s a whole other blog post!), it’s also about fleshing out your supporting cast without resorting to lazy gender shorthand. If we’re imagining characters such as Mayors, Doctors, Chefs, Coppers walking the beat, I imagine most of us (the men, anyway) will have conjured up a bunch of fellahs which is just re-enforcing the stereotypes.

There needs to be more female characters where the point of them isn’t that they ARE female.

If we can balance out our supporting casts with a more equal gender mix, it means that the leading lady doesn’t have to encompass the entire spectrum of ‘being female’. Which surely means we can then write better characters all round, right?