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		<title>Interactive Story part 8</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Ben slaps the light out.  Jonah grabs his wet shirt and shoves his arm down the reluctant damp sleeve.  Ben follows suit.
 
“Ben?  Are you out here?” his mother calls into the dark.  Ben huddles low next to the wash basin.  Jonah looks up while buttoning his damp shirt, just to see the light of the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Ben slaps the light out.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Jonah grabs his wet shirt and shoves his arm down the reluctant damp sleeve.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Ben follows suit.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“Ben?<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Are you out here?” his mother calls into the dark.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Ben huddles low next to the wash basin.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Jonah looks up while buttoning his damp shirt, just to see the light of the electronic book glowing against the sturdy beams and cobwebs.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Silent communication constituted of jabs, pointed fingers and a grimaced face makes Ben turn to cover the book with his hand.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">The motion alerts his mother.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“Alright, come out now mister.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>And I’m not waiting for tomorrow.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Ben gives the book to Jonah, and pushes against him to make him stay.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“I’m here mom,” he says as he walks slowly toward her and the door.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He grabs his coat, and tries to cover his damp shirt quickly, but not too quickly.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He grabs his backpack of books too.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It seems so heavy compared to what he just held in his hand.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“Oh, trying to cover up something are you?”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>She yanks off a glove, and tugs at his coat collar.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>She touches the shirt, rubs her fingers together, and asks “Is it clean?”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“Yes.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“What did you do?”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Ben tries to think of something to say, but comes up with nothing.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>His mind is on other things.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“I just bumped into something dusty at school.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“School’s been out for hours.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>One of your teachers would have sent for me.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“They didn’t see me.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It was just after getting out of last class.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>I bumped an old exit door.”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It was a shade of the truth, but just the least truth.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">She scowls at the boy.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“Put out the fire and come inside.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Ben returns to the stove, and throttles the dampers.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He whispers to Jonah, “See you tonight at your house,” then runs for the open doorway.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Jonah takes his shirt off again, and reopens the dampers. He folds his shirt into the center of a towel and drops the pair on top the stove.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He reverses the procedures Ben just took to shut down the power and lights.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He stuffs the books into his backpack, and dries off his back and arms with the now hot towel.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The shirt goes on last, still damp but steaming hot.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He leaves the barn tracing carefully in Ben’s latest footprints.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He walks under the eaves where snow-hollows have been carved away by the wind.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The remaining stretch from the house to the road he finishes in four long hops.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Later that night, Wallace throws a snowball at the frame of Jonah’s windows.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>A small shadow of a head in the dark window and the later creaking of the rear doorway confirms the meeting time and place.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Jonah comes out, and simply says “Mill.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Jonah’s father’s mill isn’t similar to Ben’s barn in much of any way.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The first floor is stone, but that’s about all.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Two doors wide enough for hand or sheep-drawn carts adorn the front and back.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>A normal doorway is fitted inside each of these.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Inside there is nothing but a huge pile of stacked wood and a hay-bail by a stove in a stone chimney, and a narrow stairway up the opposite stonework.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Two unequal sized trap doors are framed in the wooden ceiling.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Jonah starts the straw fire with a coal he just brought from the house in a pail.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The wood will light quickly too.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He asks his question again, but this time to Wallace.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“Do you think Earth really existed?”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“Yeah.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It had to.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The electronic library is mostly about Earth.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>And those books, well, they sure weren’t made here.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“Right.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>We don’t have that kind of technology.” <span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Jonah remembers the mandatory school field-trip to the silicon wafer refinery.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They can refine the silicon to 99.9% purity, and can make diodes and transistors from it, but that was about all.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Chipsets with 50 transistors was their limit.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He puts it out of his mind for now. <span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>“Have you listened to them?”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Jonah motions to ascend the stairs.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“I’ve only been told what’s on some of them.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They don’t let me read any.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“Ever wonder why?”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“No.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“Honestly, Wallace, doesn’t anything ever make you itch?”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“Sure.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>But I’m not stupid enough to act on it.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“So you’ve thought about what’s on the books?”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“A little. <span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Especially the one Ben found.”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>At the top of the dark stairs, Jonah fingers a switch turning on a small light.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Outside, the large windmill blades for grinding grain are feathered for winter, but groan against their old rope tie-downs in the howling wind.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The vertical axis windmill spins madly far above.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“Well, you’re a rebel now.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Here’s your catch-up reading.”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Jonah removes the electronic book from his pockets, plugs it into power, and gives the command, “Read out loud.”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Wallace is dumb-founded for a minute, but listens intently.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Jonah has a feeling of power, and pride.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He hears the soft accent, and notices the whistling S’s of the narrator.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>These remind him of a snake racing though tall dry grass.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Jonah stands at the window listening to the book talk, and waits for Ben to arrive.</span></span></p>
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		<title>Interactive Story part 7</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Jun 2009 17:03:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Wallace bumps Jonah out of the doorway, and gropes for the light switch, and pushes lightly as he tends to do.  “You guys get going.  I’ll see you tonight, at Jonah’s.  Just take the emergency exit at the ground floor, and hide behind the bushes.  Nobody will know.  The warning switches are so corroded they [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Wallace bumps Jonah out of the doorway, and gropes for the light switch, and pushes lightly as he tends to do.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“You guys get going.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>I’ll see you tonight, at Jonah’s.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Just take the emergency exit at the ground floor, and hide behind the bushes.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Nobody will know.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The warning switches are so corroded they don’t work anymore.”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He takes one last look into the room as the light fades, and he pushed Ben past himself.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Everything looks the same save the fingerprints.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Wallace locks the door.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Ben and Jonah push the emergency door open slowly.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It’s rusty hinges only let it open so far, which is fine with them.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The lanky kid could squeeze through easily, but he returns to the main desk.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Ben buys a moment pushing Jonah out the door, then opens his coat to hold the book and charger away from his body.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“Are you so fat you have to remove your coat to get out?” Jonah whispers through the slit.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>His coat and shit are dirtier than ever.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“You know what I have.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>We’ll have to wash when we get home.”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Ben points at the dirt and rust stains.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“Oh, damn it like Lawrence!”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Jonah pulls Ben hard and helps him shove the door shut.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Its hinges relent sooner, but rust and dirt make the jamb tight.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Ben kicks the door’s swept pattern off the concrete pad before crouching inside a row of corn, ripe for harvest.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">That Winterhaven’s chief elder, Lawrence, had his family name plastered on everything and supplanting His name was supposed to be a way of keeping the flock from uttering the lord’s name in vain.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It didn’t matter.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“If you’re going to cuss use the right name.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Not that pompous bastard’s,” Ben said without the slightest restraint.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“That’s an odd request, even from a half-sibling.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Sorry.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>What do we do now?”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Ben said “My barn, and wash these clothes before anyone finds out.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">It may seem silly, but memorizing the useless trivia of surroundings is half the key to survival.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The other half is knowing what to do with it.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They thread their way through crops and back-streets to his barn outside the greenhouse walls.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It isn’t much of a chore.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They’d done it before.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Children do that.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Teenagers monopolize on it for silly purposes.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They are almost adults, and purpose grows like curiosity used to.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Ben’s rivals his incredulity.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">The dash through the fresh snow to the barn leaves tracks they hadn’t laid under the white dusted glass of the town greenhouse.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The snow is deep and the wind is blowing hard.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They hold their coats tightly in the short dash to the stone-walled barn.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Only the roof is wooden shakes, and neither material holds the heat.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Ben directs Jonah to a sink, and points out the soap.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">The oddity to Jonah is that Ben ran backwards.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“What was that?”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“Two sets of footprints; one forward and one back.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It looks like whoever was out here already left.”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Ben’s stokes the nearby stove and begins peeling clothing.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“Pull off the shirt.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>I’ll get the pumps started.”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He removes items from his coat pockets.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Jonah’s eyes pop as he produces not only the two books they had been looking at, but also the charger and the electronic device.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“I’ll take it back.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It’s a library!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>You’re supposed to check things out.”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He flips a breaker on the wall to power-up the well pump.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>A rack of batteries on the wall store what power the wooden windmill above can harness.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The pump moans to life somewhere in the pipes, as a single pin-point of light shines down on them.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“Now we read the books.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Keep washing.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Ben plugs the power cord into the unit.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Jonah lets loose a loud sigh of relief when the screen glows a square of light.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“Well, we didn’t break it.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Don’t get it wet.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>How are we going to read, in the dark, while working?”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Ben shoves a book into the slot and says “Just read.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">To their surprise, the device does.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It begins talking in an odd dialect, something like his grandfather sounds, but more intense.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The words are soft, rounded, pronounced evenly and slowly.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“The Earth Day celebration began informally in the nineteen-seventies as a rebellion by the baby-boomer generation against the polluting policies of large multinational corporations.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">The story is confusing to them.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They have no idea what a nation is.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They don’t know how a baby can be made to boom.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>But regardless of shivering shirtless in the barn, the words rebellion, and generation, and 1970 all make sense.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Jonah whispers “Add 400 to 1970 and you get 2370, at least.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The world is lot older than even Mr. Simpson told Wallace.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“Much older.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Four or five times as old.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>And they rebelled.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>From now on, remember that the elders lie,” Ben concludes.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“This information is far older that them.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>I wonder why they don’t want us to know.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">They watch a crowd in the bright sunshine singing.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They’ve never seen crowds that big.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It has more people than in all of Winterhaven combined, but they’re almost all one generation.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The song’s words don’t make any sense.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It’s in a place called San Francisco.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They’ve never heard of that place either.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“I think we can get back to this.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>These are both history lessons, but it’s more remote than this one.” Ben shakes his hands part-way dry, and rubs them the rest of the way on his still dirty shirt.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He holds up the other book.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>As he swaps the books he says, “At least this one is from Winterhaven.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Maybe it’ll tell how many years lapsed between the year of the Star-sword and this 1970 date.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It might also tell us about the start of the lies.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">The book flickers.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Jonah this time says “Just read,” and is pleased that the device does.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They shiver and scrub under the small LED light dangling at the end of a long thin wire.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The device begins with the prologue.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">   </span>&#8220;Prior to leaving Proncyn, the founding families for stellar system HD 10867 began a detailed genetic catalog.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Knowledge gleaned from founder&#8217;s databases on Iceland, Easter Island, the Martian Colonies, and Procyn III itself led the mission planners to enforce an unusual marital system on what is now called Winterhaven, to avoid the pitfalls of what is generically called Founder&#8217;s Syndrome.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>In each example, genetic mutations of a single founding family have the tendency to propagate throughout the population within a dozen generations, and non-mutated versions of the gene are lost from the current stockpile.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>These mutations are not limited to a single type of deformity or predisposition, and often run the gambit of existing known and sometimes heretofore unknown diseases.&#8221;</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">They listen intently as it goes on in its softened dialect.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The T’s are delicate and ticking, unlike their hard snapping ones.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Vowels roll instead of bark.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It’s almost like music.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">   </span>&#8220;The marriages of Winterhaven families are to be temporary for the first ten generations, so that a man and woman can bear anywhere from two to four children as a couple.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Then the couple splits, and marries others.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Each coupling is expected to bring children into this world, and hopefully with them genetic diversity.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>No couple is allowed to permanently stay married as on Earth or Proncyn.&#8221;</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Jonah asks, &#8220;What the hell is Proncyn?&#8221;</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Ben whispers &#8220;Shut-up.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The machine continues without pausing.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">   </span>“Three generations into the Winterhaven experiment, some psychological abnormalities became evident in the families of three founders.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>When combined, the genetic abnormalities lend to schizophrenic disorders in offspring.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>A committee of founders was convened to determine methods of removing the genetic flaws from the populace, and review the genetic disposition of individuals that may or may not be carriers of those genes.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The records within this book indicate the actions taken by the committee and imposed as law for the disposition of the individuals both carrying and affected by genetic disorders.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">   </span>“Chapter One, Formation of the Founders Committee, September 2583.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“What?”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Jonah’s voice echoes through the barn.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>After some calculations in his head, and in a lower voice he says, “That makes this year 2983?”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“I don’t know which year the year of the Star-Sword is.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>You could be off by a hundred easily.”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The machine resumes without prompting.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“The senior geneticist Alicia Simpson returned the first evidence of an inheritable marker upon the request of Winterhaven’s psychologist Dr. James Portnoy, who had three pre-teens in the Star-Sword’s brig.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Each displayed sudden mood swings, ranging from violent outbursts to hallucinations of persecution.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The three are related only by one father, that being the captain of the ship, Captain Lawrence, and two unrelated maternal families, N&#8217;Domon and Cooper.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">The boys gape and turn to each other.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Ben says “Stop reading,” as a command to the machine.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“These people, they only have one last name.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Isn’t that weird?<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>And Lawrence?”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“So, the Lawrence family is from the Captain, and they’re psychotic?”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>At that moment, they both hear the barn door creaking open.</span></span></p>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Jun 2009 01:00:50 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>miguel48439</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[…..”Well well Wallace I see that your curiosity has gotten the better of you again,”  Mr. Simpson said, “you know as well as I do that what happened back over 5 centuries ago is better left alone. Am I going to have to padlock the basement up so that you cannot have entry?”
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>…..”Well well Wallace I see that your curiosity has gotten the better of you again,”  Mr. Simpson said, “you know as well as I do that what happened back over 5 centuries ago is better left alone. Am I going to have to padlock the basement up so that you cannot have entry?”<br />
“No sir I will have to get going I have to attend to the academics upstairs before I leave. I just thought I heard a noise down here and was checking it out.”  he stuttered ever so slightly as he spoke. “but I see that it is nothing more than a mouse or two.”<br />
“Ok then I will see you tomorrow 7am sharp,” he said.</p>
<p>Mr. Simpson went back up the stairs and headed out of the door. When they all heard the door close, they sighed in relief.<br />
“What did he mean by 5 centuries when he spoke to you Wallace?” Jonah asked him, “We have only been here 400 years so that is only 4.”<br />
“Umm he must of misspoke I don’t know if he meant 5 or not he is a pretty old man, he is just confused.”<br />
Wallace said with his eyes darting to the floor.<br />
“Ya but isn’t he the historian of this world? I do not think he misspoke at all. “I think he knows a lot more than you are letting us in on.<br />
Wallace did not answer them instead; he decided to dart out of there before they asked him too many more questions. He just couldn’t answer them as he doesn’t have the whole story himself, and what he does know could be very dangerous for them all……</p>
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		<title>Interactive Story Part 5</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Jun 2009 02:02:38 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Shell</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[
 Jonah wiped the grime off his fingers onto his shirt. He looked down at his white shirt and saw the black stain. “That’s going to earn me an hour washing the outer windows at home.” He turned back to the display cases. 6243987240, 6243987241, 6243987243.
 “It’s missing. I know I have the number correct.” [...]]]></description>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span> </span>Jonah wiped the grime off his fingers onto his shirt. He looked down at his white shirt and<span> </span>saw the black stain. “That’s going to earn me an hour washing the outer windows at home.” He turned back to the display cases. 6243987240, 6243987241, 6243987243.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span> </span>“It’s missing. I know I have the number correct.” He wiped off more of the thick black dirt to get a better look at the other shelves. 6243987242 was missing. “It’s not here.” Jonah frowned. He slowly walked back to the desk where Wallace was rocking back and forth on his heels.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span> </span>“Wallace, the one I was looking for is not there.” Jonah leaned against the edge of the desk.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span> </span>“Then maybe it doesn’t exist. We need to get out of here.” Wallace glanced around nervously, “We’re going to get caught. You know Mom will be very unhappy if I get in trouble again.”</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span> </span>“Shhh. Ben doesn’t know you’re my half-brother by mother. “ Jonah glanced quickly around the sub-basement to see where Ben was at. “Wallace, all the other cards are there, numbers leading up to the one I was looking for, and numbers for after that one. But that particular one is missing.”</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span> </span>Ben walked up to them. “I found the card for ‘Winterhaven Founding Families and Exclusionary Genetic Control’. I also found another interesting card in the next case. ‘Earth Day – Save Our Planet’. Which one do we want to look at first?”</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span> </span>Jonah looked at both cards. “Earth Day. Let’s find out what that is.”</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span> </span>Ben carefully slid the card into the machine.<span> </span>He watched the screen light up, ‘Loading, Please Wait’. The title on the card finally appeared on the screen.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span> </span>“What is Earth Day?” Ben asked the machine.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span> </span>“Earth Day was celebrated in the United States on April twenty-second. It was a day designed to…” the monotone voice cut off when the screen flickered then went black.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span> </span>“What happened?”</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span> </span>“Who’s down there? Wallace, why were the wind turbines running? What are you doing in the basement?” a voice called down the stairs.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span> </span>“I’m in trouble. I’m in so much trouble.” Wallace closed his eyes and whimpered.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span> </span><span> </span>“Wallace, tell him you were making sure the machine still worked. Hide the cards!” Jonah whispered.<span> </span>He grabbed Ben by the arm and pulled him around the corner of a display case into the deep shadows. <span> </span>He was concentrating so hard on getting them hidden that he didn’t see Ben slide both cards into his pocket.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span> </span>The two boys watched from the shadows, trying to control their breathing so they wouldn’t be heard, waiting to see what would happen to Wallace. Each footstep on the stairs seemed to take hours to hit. Thump, thump, thump&#8230;</p>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Jun 2009 15:33:53 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>HardSciFi</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Jonah found his old language tutor, who had been placed at the central library.  Wallace, although very tall, had never been much more than a mouse.  Librarian was all anybody else could manage to believe him to be.  And so it was decided for him by the elders two years ago.  Wallace is four years [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;">Jonah found his old language tutor, who had been placed at the central library.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Wallace, although very tall, had never been much more than a mouse.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Librarian was all anybody else could manage to believe him to be.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>And so it was decided for him by the elders two years ago.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Wallace is four years older than either of them, and still growing into his own huge shoes.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>His overriding honesty is what Johan is counting on when he asks him that same question.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>&#8220;Yes, there are some files in the basement, but you can&#8217;t read them,&#8221; Wallace said ever so quietly in reply.</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;">Jonah wants to yell, but in the old library loud voices can get you expelled for a year.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He asks, &#8220;Why not?<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Is there a law or something that&#8217;s supposed to keep the books out of the public&#8217;s hands?&#8221;</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;">&#8220;No, you don&#8217;t understand.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>You need a machine to read them.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They are little books, like the size of this bookmark.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>There&#8217;s only one machine that works anymore, and they only turn it on once every decade.&#8221;</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;">&#8220;A machine that reads?&#8221; Ben asks incredulously over the checkout counter.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>&#8220;This gets more unbelievable every minute.&#8221;</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;">Wallace waves them to the end of the counter.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>&#8220;No, I can show you.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Follow me.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Wallace slides a few hardbacks and leatherbacks with him to the end of the counter, and then grabs some keys from the last desk drawer.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He looks to be sure nobody else is watching, and waves for them to follow.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Leaving footprints behind on the dusty stairs, to the sub basement they go.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Wallace retrieves the keys, opens the heavy door, and fumbles for the light switch.</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;">The cavern as large as the library above has a concrete floor, rows of concrete columns, gobs of dust, but only two pieces of furniture.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>One is a gang of school desks, welded together to make a large desktop with fixed chairs.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The other is a bookcase of sorts, too shallow front-to-back and too short from shelf to shelf to hold real books, but sealed with dusty glass.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>&#8220;Over here,&#8221; Wallace says, and points to a desk in the middle of the gang.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>&#8220;This one works, but I don&#8217;t know how to turn it on.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Wallace removes a plastic bag from a small skinny box, and sets it gently back on the desk.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>&#8220;Be careful with it.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>If the boss finds out I&#8217;ve let you in here, I&#8217;ll get nothing but hard labor for the rest of my days.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They shiver at the thought of working outside in winter time repairing high windows and heavy concrete and rock walls.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It’s labor assigned by the elders for the morally wicked.</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;">Chained to the desk is a device the likes of which Ben has never before seen.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He sits down.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It&#8217;s too big to fit in a pocket, but smaller than most books he&#8217;s ever read.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He lifts it carefully and turns it over.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>There are no obvious buttons, just a silvery face imbedded in a white plastic case, and two holes in the end.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>One is a mere slit, the other a small round impression with a metal stud inside.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Wallace adds, &#8220;The power cords are under the desk.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Ben fishes for the wire, and pushes the round plug in the round hole.</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;">Ben says, &#8220;We might have to wait a bit.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The batteries, if there are any, are probably discharged.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>From here, they wait for the four rotors on the roof to dump a small fraction of electricity into the device, and hope it doesn&#8217;t fail.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Unlike the top story of the building, in the basement they can&#8217;t hear the constant groaning of the wind turbine gears above.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>“How old are these things?”</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;">“Centuries.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Nobody knows for sure.”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Wallace opens a dusty glass case, and fishes out a thin item.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>&#8220;This is the card catalog for this library.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He hands it to Jonah, who looks it over and passes it to Ben.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The words on the end confirm Wallace&#8217;s words, and an arrow on the end tells them what to do with it.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Ben shoves it in the slot until it stops moving.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The silver screen lights up and it shows the words and asks out loud, &#8220;State your search criteria.&#8221;</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;">Befuddled, Ben doesn&#8217;t know what to do.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He’s never heard a machine talk before.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Jonah asks over his shoulder, &#8220;Why is the world only four hundred years old?&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>A list on the screen shows items like &#8216;The Geologic Ages of Earth&#8217; and a match criteria of 65%.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Several dozen items appear, all with lower ratings, and a pull-bar on the side shows the list growing as they read.</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;">&#8220;Try that one,&#8221; Jonah suggests the first with the highest match.</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;">&#8220;What do I do?&#8221; Ben asks, almost afraid of it.</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;">&#8220;Touch it,&#8221; Wallace says.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Ben does, the screen flitters and shows a number.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>&#8220;That ten digit number corresponds to a number on this card catalog.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>You just get the card, and shove it in.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Then you read.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Jonah is already muttering the number over and over.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Once he’s convinced he won’t forget, he runs to the cases.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He continues repeating the number over and over as he wipes dust off the glass.</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;">&#8220;Maybe that isn&#8217;t what I want to ask,&#8221; Ben says.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He pushes the screen in the corner a few times, before asking a new question, &#8220;Why does Winterhaven have no Leibniz family?&#8221;</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;">The resultant list is disorganized, containing mostly entries for Calculus.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The item &#8216;Winterhaven Founding Families and Exclusionary Genetic Control&#8217; appears on the second page.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Ben taps that one, memorizes the number and begins his search among the dusty cases.</span></p>
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		<description><![CDATA[Breaking from the window view, Ben places the history book with his others.  He hefts and carefully opens his calculus book.  Like all the books, it&#8217;s old thin pages crackle instead of bending in his fingers.  Individual cellulose fibers fly into the thin cold air.  His breath freezes the microscopic shards against the old wavy [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Breaking from the window view, Ben places the history book with his others.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He hefts and carefully opens his calculus book.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Like all the books, it&#8217;s old thin pages crackle instead of bending in his fingers.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Individual cellulose fibers fly into the thin cold air.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>His breath freezes the microscopic shards against the old wavy window glass.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Monsoon moisture worked deep into window crevices now form a thick autumn frost between the second and third panes.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He carefully turns the pages to the front, to check the print date there: 327 YSS.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It&#8217;s seventy years old.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He knows YSS means &#8216;Year of the Star-Sword&#8217;, but beyond that it holds no meaning.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>There is no star nor sword hidden among the snow dusted firs and larches leaning in the wind.</span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Ben turns to the checkout list inside the back cover.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Here, he can plainly see the names of previous students, as often written by their mothers as themselves using all four proper family names.</span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">He&#8217;d always been forewarned about inbreeding, but he didn&#8217;t understand why they kept such meticulous track of great grandparents.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They&#8217;re all dead.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Generations had read this book, including his maternal-paternal great grandfather.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>His name is at the top of the page.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The book is special to him for that reason, not for the information it holds.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>He evaluates his own position on the contents and reconsiders his friend&#8217;s point.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: small; font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">&#8220;Maybe you&#8217;re right, Jonah.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>This math book implies a longer history.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>These names, Euler, Newton, Leibniz, we don&#8217;t have any of these names on Winterhaven.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They came from somewhere.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>But there are none here, and everyone is required to have at least two children with four spouses by law.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It still feels like fiction; men flying across the stars.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Wars with Xanadians.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>We can&#8217;t cross a big river unless it&#8217;s frozen solid.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Bridge timbers are too short and can&#8217;t withstand the summer mudflows.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Besides how much dirtier could their sky be than this?&#8221;</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: small; font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">He said &#8216;a history&#8217; as his language has diverged.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The soft consonants get hard pronunciation as a Darwinian response to yelling through the harsh winds of Winterhaven.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: small; font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">Jonah says nothing for now.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Winning an argument against a friend and half-brother by father is a double edged sword.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>They look through the frozen window onto a wintry sky streaked here and there with the black soot of chimneys burning wet wood.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Most stoves double-burn the creosote out of the natural tars by drafting the smoke over an iron re-burn plate.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Jonah had wire-brushed his mother&#8217;s ashy re-burn plate as part of his weekly chores.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>&#8220;Smoke only shows where there&#8217;s tar.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>All the fires make carbon dioxide.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>I wonder if we&#8217;re repeating their mistakes too.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>I just wish we knew more about them.&#8221;</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: small; font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">&#8220;Maybe we can.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Your friend, Wallace?<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>The one that works in the library.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Do you think he could find anybody named Newton?&#8221;</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: small; font-family: Times New Roman;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">The library is a massive building of old construction in the core of town both under and inside the ring of greenhouses.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>You can spot the old multi-storied buildings by the straight lines and square corners of concrete and brick. The newer are cheap field stone and mortar and lie outside the greenhouses.</span></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 72.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">&#8220;Maybe there is another library inside we haven&#8217;t been told about.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>One that tells if not about Earth, at least tells of a time before 400 years ago.&#8221;</span></p>
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