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		<title>The Many Meanings of “Sweat”</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Mar 2010 01:00:22 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Maeve Maddox</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Back when Beowulf was written, the word "sweat" had the meaning of "blood."<p><hr>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class="tweetmeme_button" style="float: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><a href="http://api.tweetmeme.com/share?url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.dailywritingtips.com%2Fthe-many-meanings-of-%25e2%2580%259csweat%25e2%2580%259d%2F"><img src="http://api.tweetmeme.com/imagebutton.gif?url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.dailywritingtips.com%2Fthe-many-meanings-of-%25e2%2580%259csweat%25e2%2580%259d%2F" height="61" width="51" /></a></div><p><strong>Sweat</strong> is one of those Old English words that has dwindled in meaning since Anglo-Saxon times. Back in those sword-swinging times, <strong>sweat</strong> mean &#8220;blood.&#8221;  </p>
<p>By Middle English times <strong>sweat</strong> had acquired its modern meaning of “perspiration.”</p>
<p>In addition to its current literal meaning, <strong>sweat</strong> enjoys a rich figurative life:</p>
<p><strong>sweat of one’s brow</strong><br />
This expression comes from Genesis 3:19: </p>
<blockquote><p>In the sweat of thy face shalt thou eat bread, till thou return unto the ground; for out of it wast thou taken: for dust thou art, and unto dust shalt thou return.</p></blockquote>
<p> The expression has been used with a legal meaning in discussions of copyright law: “the effort expended in labor, and the value created thereby.”</p>
<p><strong>sweat equity</strong><br />
value added to a house by means of the unpaid labor of owner or tenant.</p>
<p><strong>sweatshirt</strong><br />
&#8220;a collarless long-sleeved pullover made of cotton jersey with a smooth-finished face and a heavily napped back&#8221; &#8211;Merriam Webster</p>
<p><strong>sweat pants</strong><br />
athletic pants made of the same fabric as a sweatshirt</p>
<p><strong>sweatband/sweat-band</strong>: can be either the band of leather or other material that forms the lining of a cap, or a band of terry cloth or other absorbent material worn around the head to absorb perspiration.</p>
<p><strong>sweat bee</strong><br />
a bee attracted to the salt in human perspiration</p>
<p><strong>night sweats</strong><br />
Excessive sweating during sleep. Medical term: <em>Sleep hyperhidrosis</em></p>
<p><strong>sweat shop</strong><br />
a small factory that does not conform to local standards of safety, sanitation, length of workday, or payment.</p>
<p><strong>sweat lodge</strong><br />
an enclosed area heated by steam from water poured on hot stones; used especially by American Indians for spiritual and/or health purposes.</p>
<p><strong>sweater girl</strong><br />
a model or actress who wears tight-fitting sweaters for publicity photos. The first “sweater girl” was Lana Turner.</p>
<p><strong>no sweat</strong><br />
This idiom means “no problem.”<br />
<em>“Can you fix this wretched computer for me?”<br />
“No sweat,”</em></p>
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		<title>No Hyphen in “Ramshackled”</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Mar 2010 01:00:50 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Maeve Maddox</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[When I saw “ram-shackled” used to describe a boat. the image of a boat fettered to a ram sprang immediately to mind.<p><hr>
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<p>Both <strong>ramshackle</strong> and <strong>ramshackled</strong> are used to describe a building or other fairly large object in a state of extreme disrepair. </p>
<p>The word started out as <em>ransackled</em> and is related to such words as <em>ransom</em> and <em>sack</em> (as in “to pillage.”)</p>
<p>I’ve also seen <strong>ramshackle/ramshackled</strong> written as two words:</p>
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Ram-shackled economies &#8211;headline at the <em>New Statesman</em></p>
<p>Factories in China range from some of the most modern in the world to small ram shackled facilities. &#8211;story at the <em>Huffington Post</em></p></blockquote>
<p>Both <strong>ramshackle</strong> and <strong>ramshackled</strong> should be written as one word.</p>
<p>Unless, of course, you are making a pun, as the writer of this <em>Washington Post</em> headline was doing:</p>
<blockquote><p>Ram-Shackled<br />
The Redskins&#8217; Defense Is Shredded For 579 Yards in an Overtime Loss</p></blockquote>
<p>The opposing team was the St. Louis Rams.</p>
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		<title>Use “Elegant Variation” in Your Resumé</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Mar 2010 01:00:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This guest author believes that when it comes to drafting a strong résumé, elegant variation is not only acceptable, but desirable.<p><hr>
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<p>W. Fowler coined the term “elegant variation” to denote the unnecessary use of synonyms to denote a single thing.  One of his examples was a newspaper excerpt in which the writer referred to the same person, the King of England, as Emperor, His Majesty, and the Monarch.  Fowler’s objection to this kind of “elegant variation” was that </p>
<blockquote><p>“the effect is to set readers wondering what the significance of the change is, only to conclude that there is none.” </p></blockquote>
<p>When it comes to drafting a strong resumé, elegant variation is not only acceptable, but desirable.</p>
<p>Your resumé is a marketing document.  The product being marketed is you.  The death knell of any marketing campaign is boredom. Boring products don’t sell.  If your resumé comes across as uninteresting, so do you: you probably won’t get put in the short pile; you probably won’t get interviews, and someone with a more exciting resumé will get the job.  </p>
<p>Many resumés use the same verbs and phrases over and over again. You can use “elegant variation” to engage the reader with the use of compelling, absorbing, engrossing, gripping, riveting, and fascinating action verbs and descriptive words.</p>
<p>Here are some examples of  “elegant variation” in action – </p>
<blockquote><p>Why say “led” when you can claim to have <em>spearheaded, propelled, pioneered, orchestrated, officiated, optimized, instituted, inspired, headed, governed, enacted, directed, crafted, controlled, championed, built</em>, or <em>supervised</em>.</p>
<p>Why say you “developed” something when you can use <em>cultivated, advanced, evolved, fostered, amplified, promoted, expanded, actualized, refined, augmented, enriched, extended, magnified</em>, or <em>strengthened</em>.</p>
<p>Why “handle” something when you can<em> address, advance, alter, apply, centralize, compile, conduct, construct, coordinate, determine, execute, exhibit, formalize, govern, oversee</em>, or <em>establish</em> it.</p></blockquote>
<p>Obviously, these words cannot and should not be substituted without understanding context and nuance. It behooves you to spend the time to find alternates whenever possible.  </p>
<p>There are numerous tools that can help your resume be more stimulating. I have a dog-eared and coffee-stained copy of<em> Roget’s International Thesaurus</em>.  This book was a gift from my father when I was in college and is still without a doubt, the most useful resource for writing – period. When I am writing for clients, including business documents, resumés, and cover letters, I keep this book very close by to help me identify synonyms to avoid repeating the same words over and over. </p>
<p>The Internet is a wonderful source of new words to use in your career documents.  Some examples that I use regularly are dictionary.com and visualthesaurus.com.  </p>
<p>Job descriptions can provide a plethora of phrases and key words that you should review. Part of what draws the attention of a hiring manager is the use of key words that are related to the job vacancy. It is very easy to identify positions online; review the roles in connection with your résumé so you can create some compelling content as you draft your document.</p>
<p>Employ some creativity when creating your focused, succinct, cogent, inspirational, targeted, exceptionally results-focused résumé. (How’s that for a few adjectives?) Entice your reader with a taste – not the plate of what you have to offer!</p>
<p><em>Debra Wheatman is a human capital management strategist and the founder of <a href="http://www.careersdonewrite.com">Careers Done Write</a>, a career services firm.  Debra is also the <a href="http://resumesdonewrite.blogspot.com">Career Doctor</a>, a career advice blog for business leaders and executives.</em></p>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Mar 2010 14:57:26 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Daniel Scocco</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Time for another round of the DWT Poetry Competition. If you want to check the previous rounds just visit the <a href="http://www.dailywritingtips.com/category/competitions/">Competitions</a> category page. <p><hr>
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<p>Previous rounds got over 200 votes each, so thanks for all the readers who are taking the time to read the poems and vote on their favorites. </p>
<p>As usual we have some thoughtful poems today, so check them out.</p>
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<h2>1. <em>A Mustache for Everyone</em> by Garrett Burnett</h2>
<p>A lip looks too bare without any hair be it lady or gent or tiniest tot</p>
<p>It’s clear a mustache delivers panache, style that cannot be sold or bought</p>
<p>No matter the gender or age, it will render each wearer a look debonair</p>
<p>But if you can’t grow one, you still ought to show one; a ‘stache doesn’t have to be hair</p>
<p>A grease smudge or marker, whichever is darker; bristles from combs or toothbrushes</p>
<p>Rope, string, and twine are equally fine; use feathers from sparrows or juncos or thrushes</p>
<p>Draw it on, glue it on, tape it on, screw it on; put on your mustache however you must</p>
<p>Human biology owes an apology, handing out whiskers, innately unjust</p>
<p>Mustache-based fashion has stirred up our passion; all the imposters must go</p>
<p>Beards are too much and sideburns too little and goatees have drifted too low</p>
<p>Pencil thin or curled at the ends, like Salvador Dali’s or Errol Flynn’s</p>
<p>Bushy, dapper, dappled, svelte, walrus-like like Roosevelt</p>
<p>Snidely Whiplash, Fu Manchu, surely one is right for you</p>
<p>Empty and bare a lip, like the Sahara, could certainly use an oasis</p>
<p>A “mo” should spring forth just a bit to the north and be groomed on a regular basis</p>
<p>Sculpted with wax in reds, browns, or blacks; distinguished when white or when gray</p>
<p>A suitable face is the one that is graced by a line that bisects it midway</p>
<p><br/></p>
<h2>2. <em>Kamikaze Text</em> by Pete Calderone</h2>
<p>Digital discourse<br />
With a buzzsaw bravado<br />
Renewable force<br />
Once incommunicado</p>
<p>Kamikaze text<br />
Serrating protection<br />
Defenses now vexed<br />
Aortic dissection<br />
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<h2>3. <em>The Invisible Entertainer</em> by S. Winter-Hudelson</h2>
<p>An hour before nine strikes,<br />
He paces floors, forehead in hand.<br />
Finally, Pianoman&#8217;s feet drag his body<br />
        to the bar</p>
<p>He enters Rosie&#8217;s and pours a Pabst,<br />
Slips five-ones in his bowl<br />
And slides behind the spinet,<br />
        seen by none.</p>
<p>Fingers leap-frog ivories<br />
And tunes fight smoke<br />
Begging for claps<br />
        rarely heard.</p>
<p>He croons &#8220;Moon River&#8221;<br />
Then a version in jazz to self-amuse<br />
A lone fan cheers,<br />
        most are numb.</p>
<p>Wobbling, slobbering bejeweled old fools<br />
Stuff ten spots in tip bowl<br />
And request words and music<br />
        he knows not.</p>
<p>Breasts pressing his arm,<br />
Two too red lips exhale stench to<br />
Breathy beer strains of sexy songs<br />
        known to most.</p>
<p>A stupored couple staggers toward the stage<br />
Holding more than dancing.<br />
When beat and step don&#8217;t match,<br />
        neither cares.</p>
<p>The crowd, drowned in liquor downed long ago,<br />
And four hours crawl to an end.<br />
He covers the keys and rotely winds the cord<br />
        to his mic.</p>
<p>He exits stage left,<br />
The bill-brimming bowl<br />
Tucked under his arm,<br />
        his sole reward.<br />
<br/></p>
<h2>4. <em>Christmas Search</em> by Marilyn Donnell</h2>
<p>Shepherds from the hillside bound,<br />
Left their stock and came to town;<br />
Searching for a baby dear,<br />
Worshiped Christ as they came near.</p>
<p>Swaddling clothes, stable dim,<br />
Manger cot, what Joy:  it’s Him!</p>
<p>Wise men coming from afar<br />
They were searching for a Star.<br />
Its guiding rays through darkest night<br />
Led them on with Hope, Truth, Light.</p>
<p>In that stable, in God’s good time<br />
Found Jesus, Savior for all mankind.<br />
By this Babe, God’s Own Son,<br />
Came Good News for everyone.</p>
<p>Searching for Redeemer Child<br />
Sent from God, Savior mild.<br />
I will follow, like them will find<br />
Jesus Christ, God’s Son, Divine.<br />
<br/></p>
<h2>5. <em>Dreams</em> by Robert Fenhagen</h2>
<p>When I was a child.<br />
 Vivid dream that I remember.<br />
 Standing atop a circus trapeze pole—tall, very slender, very scary.<br />
  I wasn’t scared.<br />
 I dove off of the platform.<br />
Flying down very fast to save a woman.<br />
Life went on.<br />
Trying to save others from  killing themselves—I can’t.<br />
But I can dream.<br />
<br/></p>
<h2>6. <em>Untitled</em> by Ginger Dexheimer</h2>
<p>I never thought the valley could run so deep<br />
But I have walked here for so long upon these tired feet<br />
And I have stumbled, falling, into it&#8217;s darkest pit<br />
Clinging to the edge by my fingertips<br />
Crying &#8220;Lord help me, lest I fall and be no more.<br />
I&#8217;ve just lost the strength for the battle that lie before&#8221;<br />
Then softly, so gently, I feel Your embrace<br />
Holding me to Your heart, wiping the tears from my face<br />
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<h2>7. <em>How to Create a Ballerina</em> by Terry Coffey</h2>
<p>Our dog whirls and twirls in dizzying swirls<br />
Front paws outstretched, big ears pointing straight back</p>
<p>The day they found her she was skittering<br />
Back and forth across a busy highway</p>
<p>Aimless, friendless, alone in the wide world<br />
Her heart full of worms and her ribs showing</p>
<p>It took six hot dogs and much cajoling<br />
To coax her shaking frame into the car</p>
<p>Doses of arsenic rid her of worms<br />
A steady diet hid her ribs again</p>
<p>Every day I walk her down to the park<br />
Every day she dances with excitement</p>
<p>Shaking off my emotional baggage<br />
Breaking through my jaded, cynical crust</p>
<p>All it took was six hot dogs to create<br />
A hairy, 50 pound ballerina</p>
<p>A dancing miracle of renewal<br />
Proof of the power of love and hot dogs<br />
<br/></p>
<h2>8. <em>The Voice Within</em> by Salvatore Buttaci</h2>
<p>In her last years she explained it away<br />
by saying she was afflicted with<br />
a touch of poetry. Her lungs rasped<br />
with words that had strayed from a heart<br />
heavy with secrets to confess in metered lines.</p>
<p>A touch of poetry in the trembling<br />
of her gnarled fingers that gripped the pen<br />
against the white field of paper, shaking<br />
out words like seeds dreaming of springtime,<br />
like the hand wave of a queen tossed at crowds.</p>
<p>She had spent her days in the busy vocation<br />
of housewife and mother.  In good health<br />
she did her best to make a difference<br />
in all their lives, but for herself, she ignored<br />
the voice within that begged her time.</p>
<p>A touch of poetry in the way her thin lips<br />
quivered when she mouthed the rhythmic words of<br />
a heart bursting with the need to dictate<br />
those escaped moments, those tiny joys and sorrows<br />
she had experienced once and needed to write down.</p>
<p>The years had galloped by.  Evenings she lay in bed<br />
remembering and could not sleep. The years<br />
had galloped by.  And her pen would tell the stories<br />
line by line: ink and tears, tears and ink—a legacy<br />
of sorts.  She hoped they would find her in those verses.</p>
<p>She’d go to sleep and dream herself away.<br />
A still life, old woman with folded hands,<br />
mother, wife, friend, neighbor, recorder of dreams.<br />
What, they’ll ask, took her from us? She seemed fine.</p>
<p>And if they read those notebooks lying there,<br />
read each poem that filled her lungs, coursed through<br />
much traveled arteries, spoke to her in lonely times,<br />
said all of her reasons for being born and living long,<br />
they will be comforted and treasure those words she touched.<br />
<br/></p>
<h2>9. <em>The Sweet Taste of Chocolate Melting on her Tongue</em> by Rachel Green</h2>
<p>In the door of the fridge is a bar of dark chocolate,<br />
a good third of it eaten but still plenty left<br />
she eats a single square when she gets an urge<br />
for the stuff, it saves her eating a bar from the local shop.</p>
<p>Not that she minds the walk –<br />
it&#8217;s not far and she can take the dog<br />
his eager paws pulling her down the hill<br />
until she yanks on his chain with a cross &#8217;stop pulling&#8217;<br />
and he bows his great Shepherd head as if he knows<br />
he&#8217;s been too boisterous and he&#8217;s really sorry<br />
for at least a few seconds until he remembers<br />
the wood is just through this snicket here –<br />
Are we going to the woods, mum?</p>
<p>Through the woods and left through the estate where dogs bark<br />
and she does a shuffle step dance to avoid the litter<br />
and the dog mess other people leave;<br />
past the council bins and the repossessed houses<br />
to the open-all-hours except lunchtime<br />
where she ties up the dog and pushes open the door,<br />
the shrilling bell announcing her appearance on the CCTV.</p>
<p>Milk today, and tea bags and a loaf of bread –<br />
medium cut means more slices for the money –<br />
and her fingers linger over the chocolate bars.<br />
No. Not today. She has that stuff in the fridge.<br />
<br/></p>
<h2>10. <em>Untitled</em> by Claire Collins </h2>
<p>And God said to me<br />
&#8220;If you wish it<br />
You may go to Earth<br />
For a visit.&#8221;<br />
And I said &#8220;Sure!&#8221;<br />
And God said,<br />
&#8220;Are you certain?<br />
There is great despair<br />
and unhappiness, there.<br />
They kill each other<br />
and threaten the planet.<br />
Here it is calm and serene.<br />
Are you sure you want to go?&#8221;<br />
And I said, &#8220;Sure!&#8221;</p>
<p>93 years later, I returned<br />
and God said, &#8220;Well?&#8221;-<br />
&#8220;Oh, it was just as you said-<br />
death and destruction,<br />
despair and unhappiness.&#8221;<br />
&#8220;You regret it then?&#8221; God asked.<br />
&#8220;Oh no,&#8221; I said,<br />
I saw a daffodil and a seagull.<br />
I ate an apple and smelled bread baking.<br />
A man held me in his arms,<br />
and I held a small child in my arms,<br />
and I saw the sunset over the water.&#8221;<br />
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		<dc:creator>Maeve Maddox</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Watching an episode of The Good Wife the other evening, I was puzzled by a lawyer character's use of the word "invert."<p><hr>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class="tweetmeme_button" style="float: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><a href="http://api.tweetmeme.com/share?url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.dailywritingtips.com%2Freverse-and-invert%2F"><img src="http://api.tweetmeme.com/imagebutton.gif?url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.dailywritingtips.com%2Freverse-and-invert%2F" height="61" width="51" /></a></div><p>Watching an episode of <em>The Good Wife</em> the other evening, I was puzzled by a lawyer character&#8217;s use of the word <strong>invert</strong>.</p>
<p>A witness had been murdered. The lawyer was trying  to prove that the witness list had been leaked because the last two letters of the witness’s name were “inverted” on the official list and were also “inverted” on a note written by the killer.</p>
<p>I completely lost track of the story as I tried to figure out how the letters in what was presumably a typed word could have been turned upside down. Then the camera showed the list and I saw that the last two letters, <strong>e-r</strong>, had been reversed to <strong>r-e</strong>.  Ah, I thought, <em>reversed</em>! I could turn my attention back to the story.</p>
<p>The experience got me thinking about the two words.</p>
<p><strong>invert</strong>: 1533, from M.Fr. <em>invertir</em>, from L. invertere &#8220;turn upside down, turn about,&#8221; from <em>in</em>- &#8220;in, on&#8221; + <em>vertere</em> &#8220;to turn&#8221; </p>
<p><strong>reverse</strong>: c.1300, from O.Fr. <em>revers</em> &#8220;reverse, cross,&#8221; from L. <em>reversus</em>, pp. of revertere &#8220;turn back&#8221; </p>
<p>In some contexts “inverted” does mean “reversed.”For example, an” inverted sentence” is one in which the verb changes its usual place and comes before the subject: <em>Before me lay the ruined sword.</em>  </p>
<p>An “inverted syllogism” is one in which the statement “All A are B” invites the conclusion “All B are A.”</p>
<p>On the other hand, “inverted commas,” another term for “quotation marks,” is so termed because opening quotation marks (in some fonts anyway) are upside-down commas.</p>
<blockquote><p>Depending on the typeface, opening and closing quotation marks may be identical in form (called &#8220;vertical&#8221;, &#8220;straight&#8221;, or &#8220;typewriter&#8221; quotation marks), or they may be distinctly left-handed and right-handed (&#8221;typographic&#8221; or, colloquially, &#8220;curly&#8221; quotation marks). The closing single quotation mark is identical or similar in form to the apostrophe, and similar to the prime symbol. &#8211;Wikipedia</p></blockquote>
<p>The OED lists 13 definitions with numerous sub-definitions for <strong>reverse</strong>, including “invert.” It gives 10 for <strong>invert</strong>, including “reverse.”</p>
<p>I’m sure that not every viewer boggled at the lawyer’s use of the word inverted in the <em>Good Wife</em> episode, but I doubt that I was the only one who did. It’s probably a good idea to think about possible ambiguity when using these words.</p>
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