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It burns in reds
so deep it scrolls
to the perimeter
of black then flits
back to the red
you might imagine
of as you mouth
in staccato the word:
flamenco.

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It burns in reds
so deep it scrolls
to the perimeter
of black then flits
back to the red
you might imagine
of as you mouth
in staccato the word:
flamenco.
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conniededona@gmail.com (connied)Mon, 09 Nov 2009 00:26:59 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113167&#p113167
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: xxx.11. pusillanimous prevaricator http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113166&#p113166 thank-you,

it was the english language
and overactive
libidos
that always go us in
trouble

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thank-you,

it was the english language
and overactive
libidos
that always go us in
trouble
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conniededona@gmail.com (connied)Mon, 09 Nov 2009 00:24:02 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113166&#p113166
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: V-12 Thanksgiving In The Background http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113165&#p113165
Once, being thankful,
especially thankful,
on that one day of the year,
for our lives, food we’ve
struggled for, traditional dishes
we’ve bonded together to create,
was very special to families.

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Once, being thankful,
especially thankful,
on that one day of the year,
for our lives, food we’ve
struggled for, traditional dishes
we’ve bonded together to create,
was very special to families.
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conniededona@gmail.com (connied)Mon, 09 Nov 2009 00:22:07 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113165&#p113165
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XIII.8 Ethics http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113164&#p113164 thank-you,

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thank-you,]]> conniededona@gmail.com (connied)Mon, 09 Nov 2009 00:17:49 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113164&#p113164
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XLIV.28 Inner Turmoil http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113163&#p113163 grins,

the poet in the house –
sighs
at the distraction
as he struggles
with poem 28
in Day 44 –
as if Godiva
had entered the room
direct for her ride

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grins,

the poet in the house –
sighs
at the distraction
as he struggles
with poem 28
in Day 44 –
as if Godiva
had entered the room
direct for her ride
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conniededona@gmail.com (connied)Mon, 09 Nov 2009 00:15:05 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113163&#p113163
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: LIII - 20 Sleepover http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113162&#p113162 a big oops!

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a big oops!]]> conniededona@gmail.com (connied)Mon, 09 Nov 2009 00:11:58 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113162&#p113162
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: VI. 17. Camaraderie http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113161&#p113161 smiles,

Giggling and laughing out loud
At the splashes
From the heavy cream
Being whipped to a froth
In the big mixing bowl.
Mother and daughter
Together again,

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smiles,

Giggling and laughing out loud
At the splashes
From the heavy cream
Being whipped to a froth
In the big mixing bowl.
Mother and daughter
Together again,
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conniededona@gmail.com (connied)Mon, 09 Nov 2009 00:08:20 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113161&#p113161
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: VI. 4 Mini Character Portraits http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113160&#p113160 Kudos,
'ilima

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Kudos,
'ilima]]>
sternjrw001@hawaii.rr.com ('Ilima Stern)Sun, 08 Nov 2009 22:11:49 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113160&#p113160
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XLIV.27 November Rain http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113157&#p113157
But I prefer this mood.

Smiles.

Gary

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But I prefer this mood.

Smiles.

Gary]]>
garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Sun, 08 Nov 2009 21:40:20 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113157&#p113157
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XLIV.26 Tears of the Sun http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113156&#p113156
I was clearly in a mood when I wrote this one - and not a good one either.

Smiles.

Gary

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I was clearly in a mood when I wrote this one - and not a good one either.

Smiles.

Gary]]>
garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Sun, 08 Nov 2009 21:39:25 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113156&#p113156
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XXXIII. 5. Of Silhouettes as Lollipops http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113154&#p113154 reach for the skinny
branches of a tree
bathed in a harbor
of sunset.

There's something
about a silvered sky
back lit in yellows
with the softest
fingers of pink

Charming, this verse to the highlights of life.

Smiles.

Gary

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reach for the skinny
branches of a tree
bathed in a harbor
of sunset.

There's something
about a silvered sky
back lit in yellows
with the softest
fingers of pink

Charming, this verse to the highlights of life.

Smiles.

Gary]]>
garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Sun, 08 Nov 2009 21:36:41 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113154&#p113154
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: VI. 16. Direct Hit http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113153&#p113153 With his satellite dish
On the bird of paradise plants
In our side yard.

Ouch. Hope the birds bloom again.

Smiles.

Gary

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With his satellite dish
On the bird of paradise plants
In our side yard.

Ouch. Hope the birds bloom again.

Smiles.

Gary]]>
garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Sun, 08 Nov 2009 21:35:00 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113153&#p113153
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: VI.3 Emptying the Puddles http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113150&#p113150 and do my solo on the front lawn.
Parading in front of the neighborhood
soaked in my wet cotton PJ’s

LOL, may I join you, friend. Together we can empty the sea...

Smiles.

Gary

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and do my solo on the front lawn.
Parading in front of the neighborhood
soaked in my wet cotton PJ’s

LOL, may I join you, friend. Together we can empty the sea...

Smiles.

Gary]]>
garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Sun, 08 Nov 2009 21:17:13 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113150&#p113150
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: LIII - 19 Lessons in the Blues http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113148&#p113148
Smiles.

Gary

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Smiles.

Gary]]>
garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Sun, 08 Nov 2009 21:12:38 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113148&#p113148
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: LIII - 17 Dove Song http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113139&#p113139
How cute, the way you've phrased this. I can here the cooing. When we're in Florida, the doves, early birds that they are, coo like this in the morning. Bob doesn't like them but I like their soft songs.

Nice job,
Smiles,
Helen

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How cute, the way you've phrased this. I can here the cooing. When we're in Florida, the doves, early birds that they are, coo like this in the morning. Bob doesn't like them but I like their soft songs.

Nice job,
Smiles,
Helen]]>
blueline@goobertree.com (Helen V)Sun, 08 Nov 2009 17:54:45 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113139&#p113139
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XIII.7 In Search of Water http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113138&#p113138
You've done it again. This is a poem of many layers...the water of humans, of the world, and I love the part about the handyman's full employment act. Hey, plumbers have work all over, don't they...hope your shower works good now and your sink faucets...what would we do with no water? Been there Wilt, and it's no fun waiting.

Good poem.
Smiles,
Helen

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You've done it again. This is a poem of many layers...the water of humans, of the world, and I love the part about the handyman's full employment act. Hey, plumbers have work all over, don't they...hope your shower works good now and your sink faucets...what would we do with no water? Been there Wilt, and it's no fun waiting.

Good poem.
Smiles,
Helen]]>
blueline@goobertree.com (Helen V)Sun, 08 Nov 2009 17:11:22 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113138&#p113138
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: a question, not a poem http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113134&#p113134
I've sent HA several messages (but not for the last couple of weeks) (in response to the suggestion for a holiday poetry contest) and never had an answer. In fact, the address
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I've sent HA several messages (but not for the last couple of weeks) (in response to the suggestion for a holiday poetry contest) and never had an answer. In fact, the address
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alicefolkart@gmail.com (AJFolkart)Sun, 08 Nov 2009 16:19:12 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113134&#p113134
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: xxx.10. it's just hard to see how it's gonna work http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113133&#p113133
Title is perfect. No one could pass this poem by without at least peeking to see what it was about.

That English teacher - no contractions? I'll bet she never had a contraction in her life!

And, even before I could really read, I'd study those Superman comics and I knew all about Lois Lane,
and I wanted to tell her, "Don't bother, honey.
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Title is perfect. No one could pass this poem by without at least peeking to see what it was about.

That English teacher - no contractions? I'll bet she never had a contraction in her life!

And, even before I could really read, I'd study those Superman comics and I knew all about Lois Lane,
and I wanted to tell her, "Don't bother, honey.
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alicefolkart@gmail.com (AJFolkart)Sun, 08 Nov 2009 16:10:05 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113133&#p113133
~~~~~~ THE NEW POETRY SHOWCASE~~~ | Re: Weekly Visits http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113113&#p113113 Greatly enjoyed! (I loved your ending!)

Welcome to Blueline!!!! Image We hope you will enjoy being with us!Image

Happy Postings!

hugs!Image
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Greatly enjoyed! (I loved your ending!)

Welcome to Blueline!!!! Image We hope you will enjoy being with us!Image

Happy Postings!

hugs!Image
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sharon-b@comcast.net (Sharon Bullard)Sun, 08 Nov 2009 10:02:22 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113113&#p113113
~~~~~~ THE NEW POETRY SHOWCASE~~~ | Re: The Wild Path http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113106&#p113106 Statistics : Posted by Silowet • on Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:28 am • Replies 2 • Views 20


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rockthatpc@yahoo.com (Silowet)Sat, 07 Nov 2009 23:54:27 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113106&#p113106
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XXVII.22 Impregnated World Leaders http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113104&#p113104
Smiles.

Gary

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Gary]]>
garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Sat, 07 Nov 2009 22:33:04 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113104&#p113104
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XXXIII. 4. Trimming the Truth http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113102&#p113102
Smiles.

Gary

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Gary]]>
garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Sat, 07 Nov 2009 22:21:49 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113102&#p113102
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: VI. 15. Mrs. Cullen http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113101&#p113101
Smiles.

Gary

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Smiles.

Gary]]>
garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Sat, 07 Nov 2009 22:20:25 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113101&#p113101
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: VI. 2 Curious Muse http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113100&#p113100 reading my poetry out loud.
This seems to comfort my significant other,
who listens, from the other room, with
ears straining, to the syncopation
of my speech. It lulls him

Smooth.

I'm going to have to try that, not sure it would work but worth the try.

Smiles.

Gary

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reading my poetry out loud.
This seems to comfort my significant other,
who listens, from the other room, with
ears straining, to the syncopation
of my speech. It lulls him

Smooth.

I'm going to have to try that, not sure it would work but worth the try.

Smiles.

Gary]]>
garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Sat, 07 Nov 2009 22:16:42 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113100&#p113100
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: LIII - 18 Night Poems http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113098&#p113098
Smiles.

Gary

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Smiles.

Gary]]>
garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Sat, 07 Nov 2009 22:10:43 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113098&#p113098
~~~~~~ THE NEW POETRY SHOWCASE~~~ | Re: Am I a Nice Guy? http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113095&#p113095

hugs!

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sharon-b@comcast.net (Sharon Bullard)Sat, 07 Nov 2009 16:12:17 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113095&#p113095
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XIII.6 History Speaks in Rhyme http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113070&#p113070
Good thoughts,
Alice

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alicefolkart@gmail.com (AJFolkart)Sat, 07 Nov 2009 11:19:28 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113070&#p113070
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: xxx.9. paying my dues http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113069&#p113069
Colds are so miserable--hope this one runs a quick course. You describe it so well that I want to spray my keyboard and mouse with disinfectant and go and wash my hands . . . eek.

And there is that sense that the rest of the world is just bouncing along without us. We feel sidelined, benched, and ignored, and no one wants to be around us.
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Colds are so miserable--hope this one runs a quick course. You describe it so well that I want to spray my keyboard and mouse with disinfectant and go and wash my hands . . . eek.

And there is that sense that the rest of the world is just bouncing along without us. We feel sidelined, benched, and ignored, and no one wants to be around us.
...]]>
alicefolkart@gmail.com (AJFolkart)Sat, 07 Nov 2009 11:16:41 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113069&#p113069
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: V-11 Second True Love http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113066&#p113066 true love to happen twice. I'm glad for you. This poem and the 1st true love poem should appear together - they make a nice set.

Alice

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true love to happen twice. I'm glad for you. This poem and the 1st true love poem should appear together - they make a nice set.

Alice]]>
alicefolkart@gmail.com (AJFolkart)Sat, 07 Nov 2009 11:03:20 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113066&#p113066
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: xxx.8. God is no excuse for failure http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113062&#p113062 if there is an almighty he's got
more to do then tend to our little
sniveling needs that's for sure.
Hello can you spell free will!
I like the poem Allen, it has good
pace and is a nicely penned rant
and I'm glad you did it!

S.

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if there is an almighty he's got
more to do then tend to our little
sniveling needs that's for sure.
Hello can you spell free will!
I like the poem Allen, it has good
pace and is a nicely penned rant
and I'm glad you did it!

S.]]>
sbmcdonough@gmail.com (sonoranpoet)Sat, 07 Nov 2009 10:26:51 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113062&#p113062
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: VI.1 Covert Writing http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113053&#p113053 Smiles,
'ilima

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'ilima]]>
sternjrw001@hawaii.rr.com ('Ilima Stern)Fri, 06 Nov 2009 21:45:30 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113053&#p113053
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: V-10 First True Love http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113052&#p113052 Cherish those memories.
Smiles,
'ilima

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Cherish those memories.
Smiles,
'ilima]]>
sternjrw001@hawaii.rr.com ('Ilima Stern)Fri, 06 Nov 2009 21:43:43 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113052&#p113052
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: VI. 14. A Million Moons http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113038&#p113038 “For when you wear my lei of stars…”
“Waikiki, at night when the shadows are falling…”

Tiny bubbles in the little grass shack... Grin.

Truthfulness.

Smiles.

Gary

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“For when you wear my lei of stars…”
“Waikiki, at night when the shadows are falling…”

Tiny bubbles in the little grass shack... Grin.

Truthfulness.

Smiles.

Gary]]>
garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Fri, 06 Nov 2009 19:11:23 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113038&#p113038
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XIII.5 Watering the West http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113034&#p113034
So bear with me sometimes, okay?

Smiles,
Wilt

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So bear with me sometimes, okay?

Smiles,
Wilt]]>
blueline@goobertree.com (Wiltshire)Fri, 06 Nov 2009 16:27:02 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113034&#p113034
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XLIV.25 Untitled http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113033&#p113033
The line

which the bird’s song

might be

which is the bird's song?

but I prefer minimal, some words not stated as understood.

Smiles.

Gary

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The line

which the bird’s song

might be

which is the bird's song?

but I prefer minimal, some words not stated as understood.

Smiles.

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garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Fri, 06 Nov 2009 15:47:04 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113033&#p113033
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XLIX.24 Super Tuesday http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113032&#p113032
Of course, there is no real difference except the whine they drink.

Smiles.

Gary

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Of course, there is no real difference except the whine they drink.

Smiles.

Gary]]>
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****Issa - 18 Haiku

****Me - “time traveler”

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allen.itz@gmail.com (allenitz)Fri, 06 Nov 2009 14:03:29 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113031&#p113031
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XXXIII. 3. The Song of Thursday Morning http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113023&#p113023
Dishes in the sink
a strand of spaghetti
hanging off the edge
of the yellow coffee mug
at a ninety degree angle
rigor mortis has set in.

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Dishes in the sink
a strand of spaghetti
hanging off the edge
of the yellow coffee mug
at a ninety degree angle
rigor mortis has set in.
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conniededona@gmail.com (connied)Fri, 06 Nov 2009 12:10:49 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113023&#p113023
THE CRITIQUE WORKSHOP | Re: Screams in the Blazing Fires http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113022&#p113022
thank you so much for your thoughts...I did feel as if this piece was missing a little something, but couldn't put my finger on it...I will give it consideration of what you said!

hugs!

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thank you so much for your thoughts...I did feel as if this piece was missing a little something, but couldn't put my finger on it...I will give it consideration of what you said!

hugs!]]>
sharon-b@comcast.net (Sharon Bullard)Fri, 06 Nov 2009 12:09:18 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113022&#p113022
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XXVII.21 The Right Way To Write A Wrong Way Love Letter http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=113014&#p113014 thank-you

When you get to the bottom
use your brothers signature
just to show you who really cares.

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thank-you

When you get to the bottom
use your brothers signature
just to show you who really cares.
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THE CRITIQUE WORKSHOP | storage http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112997&#p112997 not sure about the title, any suggestions on the poem or title, much appreciated

Storage

If only I’d worn the wide-brimmed fedora,
and dyed my hair black.
I could have balanced time as it pounced,
a pound at a time, heavy as a laundry basket
of odors or a pile of books poised on the head
for good posture. But time collapsed and cracked,
coated my neck with its yolk and plunged
into the
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not sure about the title, any suggestions on the poem or title, much appreciated

Storage

If only I’d worn the wide-brimmed fedora,
and dyed my hair black.
I could have balanced time as it pounced,
a pound at a time, heavy as a laundry basket
of odors or a pile of books poised on the head
for good posture. But time collapsed and cracked,
coated my neck with its yolk and plunged
into the
...]]>
blueline@goobertree.com (moritric)Fri, 06 Nov 2009 11:01:21 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112997&#p112997
THE CRITIQUE WORKSHOP | Re: one month by http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112996&#p112996
love,
brenda

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love,
brenda]]>
blueline@goobertree.com (moritric)Fri, 06 Nov 2009 10:56:05 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112996&#p112996
THE CRITIQUE WORKSHOP | Re: still-lifes http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112995&#p112995 Good work.


love,
brenda

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Good work.


love,
brenda]]>
blueline@goobertree.com (moritric)Fri, 06 Nov 2009 10:52:55 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112995&#p112995
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(dry celery--a micrograph)


A path
through a field of stardust,
quasi-static
the quantities
keep changing.


A team who
measures magnets
may someday find me,
a crease in blank memory.

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(dry celery--a micrograph)


A path
through a field of stardust,
quasi-static
the quantities
keep changing.


A team who
measures magnets
may someday find me,
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blueline@goobertree.com (Don Schaeffer)Fri, 06 Nov 2009 06:13:21 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112992&#p112992
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XXXIII. 2. On 17 http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112978&#p112978 is hitting this tree. It's stunning."
"Oh,ah okay, I think you're up though."
Not all golfer's are poets.

Truthfulness.

I used to go out midwinter alone just so I could take my time and relish the scenry around me. They should make courses so lovely.

Smiles.

Gary

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is hitting this tree. It's stunning."
"Oh,ah okay, I think you're up though."
Not all golfer's are poets.

Truthfulness.

I used to go out midwinter alone just so I could take my time and relish the scenry around me. They should make courses so lovely.

Smiles.

Gary]]>
garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Thu, 05 Nov 2009 17:50:40 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112978&#p112978
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: VI. 13. Stubborn http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112977&#p112977
Smiles.

Gary

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Smiles.

Gary]]>
garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Thu, 05 Nov 2009 17:48:27 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112977&#p112977
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: LIII - 16 Rain Choir http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112972&#p112972 accompanied by drums and bells,
deep-bellied cellos and
the tension of oboes,
and I have a front-row seat.

Ah, a poem that might be from the Big Wet, though I have seldom seen it rain like it does in the tropics.

Smiles.

Gary

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accompanied by drums and bells,
deep-bellied cellos and
the tension of oboes,
and I have a front-row seat.

Ah, a poem that might be from the Big Wet, though I have seldom seen it rain like it does in the tropics.

Smiles.

Gary]]>
garydawg@msn.com (gardawg)Thu, 05 Nov 2009 17:15:40 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112972&#p112972
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: V.30 Pain http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112961&#p112961
congratulations - put some "monkey blood" on it (that's what my mother called the red stuff), wrap it tight and hold it above your head for 45 seconds

or something like tht.

allen

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congratulations - put some "monkey blood" on it (that's what my mother called the red stuff), wrap it tight and hold it above your head for 45 seconds

or something like tht.

allen]]>
allen.itz@gmail.com (allenitz)Thu, 05 Nov 2009 12:41:48 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112961&#p112961
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XIII.4 A New Place http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112959&#p112959
allen

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allen.itz@gmail.com (allenitz)Thu, 05 Nov 2009 12:38:16 -0500http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112959&#p112959
The House of 30 : A perfect Day 4 Poetry AJFolkart, Gary Blankenship, Moderators | Re: XXVII.20 In Spring..... http://blueline.goobertree.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=112955&#p112955

I walked
a narrow street
coat open
and flapping
like a soaring eagle.


that's just super, unforgetable image-making

allen

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I walked
a narrow street
coat open
and flapping
like a soaring eagle.


that's just super, unforgetable image-making

allen]]>
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